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Post by ©|Re-ne, the Effigy| on Jun 14, 2006 17:21:58 GMT -5
I have not yet created a bio for this charrie, but I soon will. I hope that's aloud. Name: Fadedstorm Gender: She-cat Clan: EarthClan IC: S|wallowed W|hole I|n D|arkness[based of off, with a bit more added]
Crystal blue eyes scanned the landscape, searching for a way out of the darkness that she called her home. Tears fell gently onto the ground, yet Fadedstorm tried her best to keep them back. Her life was nothing now. She no longer loved Scarpelt, and her kits were sure to stay to ClawClan with him. None of the Clans would take her back now. She had no where to turn. It was only then that twlight set, and the houses of the Twoleg place were silhouetted against the pale purple sky and the dusted stars. Could she go back to the place where her roots had started, and her name had been Aerin? She shivered and shuffled her paws. It was only then she began her descent down the hills from the Burned Stump, toward the TwolegPlace. There was tension in every step she took.
As the night fell, she had finally reached her destination: The TwolegPlace. Not much had changed since she had left, but she smelled new scents- new kittypets who had replaced her when she had left and joined MountainClan so long ago. She approached The Fence. She stopped and glanced over her shoulder, taking one last look at ClawClan territory. She inhaled deeply, and leaped over the old broken fence, back to her old life as a kittypet. [/center]
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Post by Ravenstar on Jun 14, 2006 17:40:37 GMT -5
Swift is luckeh to have you, that was treiffic!
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Post by °•scarredheart on Jun 14, 2006 17:50:20 GMT -5
that was great!
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Post by ©|Re-ne, the Effigy| on Jun 14, 2006 18:31:45 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 14, 2006 20:57:34 GMT -5
::applauds::
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Post by Swiftstar on Jun 15, 2006 8:34:33 GMT -5
Yeah, that was pretty awesome!! There's no doubt you will get that part. But Snow's was pretty good too... I don't want to choose between them.
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Post by Snowstorm on Jun 16, 2006 15:19:34 GMT -5
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! im gonna lose.... that was so good... *sadness*
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Post by Snowstorm on Jun 16, 2006 15:29:59 GMT -5
can i make another one if snowstorm's bio sucks?
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Post by Swiftstar on Jun 16, 2006 15:32:01 GMT -5
Yes. You're not necassarily gonna lose. I don't want to decide between you two though!!
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Post by Snowstorm on Jun 16, 2006 15:54:44 GMT -5
*whines* but hers was good, but im more active the bio if i dont make dep of earthclan: Name: Pheonixfeather Gender:Female Clan:Rockclan IC: Pheonixfeather strolled out of the warriors den. The sunlight imediatly blinded her, and she staggered backwards. She squinted around camp, the elders were chatting quietly in their den. Two apprentices rolled, playfully over each other. Pheonixfeather could hear the faint sound of chirping birds, her stomach growled. Pheonixfeather Padded towards the warriors den, and stuck her head in. "Tigerstripe, would you come hunting with me and Redpaw?" She asked. Tigerstripe stretched sleepily, but got up and padded out of the den. "What time is it anyways?" Tigerstripe yawned, his eyelids drooping drowsily. Pheonixfeather's ears twitched in annoyance. "Well it doesn't really matter, the deputy asked you to go hunting." She growled. Tigerstripe blinked at her, then with out any further words they set off towards the forest. The summer breeze ruffled Pheonixfeather's fur, Tigerstripe dragged along behind her. She was totally aware that it wasn't early. She glared back at the lazy warrior. Suddenly, the sound of chirping birds grew louder. Pheonixfeather crouched down, but a red streak leapt passed her. "Redpaw!" She yowled, but the apprentice was already up the tree."I got you now bird!" Growled Redpaw, who was slowly inching across the branch to the nest. The branch suddenly gave way, and Redpaw plummeted down. Tigerstripe leapt towards her and snatched her by the scruff, in the air. He landed with a thud, his daughter shivering on the spot. "Now we know to listen to the warriors." Growled Tigerstripe, sternly. Redpaw bowed her head in shame. "Sorry..." She mumbled. "Well just don't let it happen again." Pheonixfeather growled. Without waiting, Pheonixfeather slowly crept towards a vole sitting not to far away. With one swipe, the vole was in her claws. She shook it off, then looked at the other cats expectantly. Tigerstripe padded to the right of the clearing, and dove for some out of sight prey. Redpaw remained in the center of the clearing. "Redpaw, why don't you come hunt with me." She murmered, she felt bad for the apprentice now. Redpaw's eyes widened. "With you, the deputy?" She asked.Her tail swished back and forth in excitement. "Yes, you." She meowed. "I'm sure you could be a great hunter." She added.The apprentice bounced on the spot.
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Post by ©|Re-ne, the Effigy| on Jun 16, 2006 18:25:41 GMT -5
True you may be more active, but then again I am on about everyday as well.
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Post by Snowstorm on Jun 16, 2006 18:27:50 GMT -5
true..... *rubs chin* *sihs* grrrr theres no competiotion for the other clans, why dont you be co mpetion for lakeclan lol
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Post by Thunderclaw on Jun 16, 2006 18:56:40 GMT -5
I am sad cuz I am not dep anymore and i am active!!!
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Post by Swiftstar on Jun 16, 2006 21:01:44 GMT -5
Well... *gives unsure glance*
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 16, 2006 21:20:36 GMT -5
::Looks at swift and smiles:: don't worry ::applauds again:: yaay another one for Rockclan!
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Post by °•scarredheart on Jun 16, 2006 21:46:10 GMT -5
o.O Lakeclan?! How dare you come up with that idea! *yells at Snow* THATS MY CLAN!
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Post by °•scarredheart on Jun 18, 2006 6:05:15 GMT -5
YAY FOR SUNDAY! o.O When do we find out?
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 18, 2006 6:08:17 GMT -5
**looks to hidden** She'll decided when we decide...
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Post by °•scarredheart on Jun 18, 2006 6:10:48 GMT -5
But I wanna know now... ! *whines*
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Post by ..\\::|What?|:://.. on Jun 26, 2006 15:53:14 GMT -5
Uuummm.....are these auditions closed??? Or..uh...can I still post a bio?
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