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Post by Kaemore on Jun 4, 2006 20:22:37 GMT -5
Unfortunately, Brokenclaw weighed more then the cat. His effort to throw the deputy off failed, and Brokenclaw batted at his ears, signifying attacking his face in a real battle.
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 4, 2006 21:20:03 GMT -5
Cloudedpaw rolled away and shook his pelt He was panting but his good eye showed his full determinataion. His bad eye was clouded and vacant. He watched the dep[uty his eye full of pure determination and admiration for the deputy.
Nightfeather looked on proud of his apprentice. He watcvhed and thought in his mind of how well he was doing. "Very good Cloudedpaw." he whispered to himself from time to time.
Shammrockflame smiled as her father and watched the apprentice. "YOuv'e trained him well Nightfeather." She whispered to him. "He is much like you. Determined." She said and smiled at him.
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Post by Kaemore on Jun 5, 2006 14:52:23 GMT -5
Brokenclaw noted the strenght and power in the apprentices eye, and shook his head, sitting down. "Yes. He is already a fine warrior. Once he is a warrior, I'll need him for leading patrols!"
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 5, 2006 16:31:00 GMT -5
Clouidedpaw lifted his head. "Really?" he asked. He couldn't even imagine it. Leading patrols?...WOW "I never even thopught I would become an apprentice...then i never thought I would be a warrior..." He said sitting down.
Nightfeather smiled. "Brokenclaw I thjink that HIddenstar should make him a warrior befopre the next gathering..." he said thoughtfully.
Shammrockflame looked up. "Nightfeather are you nuts?" He hasn't even been to a gathering as an apprentice yet!" She said.
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Post by *~HiddenSecrets~* on Jun 6, 2006 13:26:01 GMT -5
Hiddenstar padded up to the group of cats, she had watched Cloudedpaw practise with Brokenclaw. "Shammrockflame is right. I think it's a little early to make him a warrior." She said to nightfeather. She knew he would be strong but she didn't want him to miss out on training sessions, where he could practise some more. And it could make him arrogant to be made a warrior earlier then any other cat his age.
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 6, 2006 13:30:46 GMT -5
Nightfeathers gaze shifted from his daughter to his leader. "HIddenstar, He's so advanced! Brokenclaw said it himself! I don't know what else to teach him." He confessed softly.
Shammrockflame glared at her father for an instant before turning to Brokenclaw and trotting toward camp.
Cloudedpaw shook his head. "I don't want to be a warrior yet..." He said almost to softly to hear. He didn't want to disappoint Nightfeather but he didn't want to be made a warrior yet. It just wouldn't be fair.
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Post by *~HiddenSecrets~* on Jun 6, 2006 13:38:12 GMT -5
Hiddenstar only just heard what Cloudedpaw said and nodded in agreement. "Teach him more about the territory, hunting and some fighting techniques you've picked up. I can always change who his mentor is, if you can't teach him anything else." She said, slighly angry with Nightfeather. There was always more to teach an apprentice.
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 6, 2006 13:57:40 GMT -5
Nightfeathers eyes widend in anxiety. "NO...I can still teach him. Come on cloudedpaw." He said and trotted of toward the lakeclan border." He didn't even look back at Hiddenstar as he left the patrol which was pretty much finished anyway.
Cloudedpaw looked at Hiddenstar, "Don't Be to angry with him...Hiddenstar. He wasn't trying to be rude...He's just..." Cloudedpaw looked at his paws trying to search for the right words, "worried...that I won't make a good warrior..." he said and looked back up at Hiddenstar.
Shammrockflame looked over her shoulder at Her father leaving and trotted back to where she had left her mate and her leader. She shook her head violently and looked at Hiddenstar there was so much anger there. Anger that her father had thought Cloudedpaw was ready to become a warrior anger that he hadn't even talked to her about it...Anger that he thought he could tell her what to do even though she was a warrior. "I don't think He's ready to be a warrior yet..." She said hottly and looked back at her paws.
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Post by *~HiddenSecrets~* on Jun 6, 2006 14:02:04 GMT -5
"You will be a very good warrior but you can still learn more. Now go and patrol Lakeclan with him." She said, waiting for him to leave. She turned to Shammrockflame. "He may be your father but he won't always tell you everything." She said, comfortingly, as if she had read her mind.
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Post by Featherstar on Jun 6, 2006 15:20:15 GMT -5
Shammrockflame glared at her paws her anger far from ebbing. She didn't even look up as Hiddenstar spoke. "He always tells me everything..." She said almost saddly. She shook her head and glared at her fathers tail as it disappeard into the brush. "FIne..." she siad and turne dto leave. "If I may be excused Hiddenstar." She said before leaving the deputy and leader together.
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Post by Kaemore on Jun 6, 2006 16:43:07 GMT -5
Brokenclaw watched her leave, then looked up at Hiddenstar. "True. He is not ready, but he will be a good warrior. But he needs more confidence, and only time can give him that." He fell silent into thought.
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